August 28, 2008
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Posted by: Clayton Makepeace
April 24, 2006
Issue #40

A Conversation with the Legendary Copywriter Gary Bencivenga Part I

In this special interview issue …

Welcome, Business-Builder!

If the thought of an extended interview with Gary Bencivenga doesn’t already have you quivering with anticipation, you are obviously in desperate need of a quick course in direct response marketing lore.

Three decades ago, when I was just beginning my journey in this fascinating business, eagerly devouring everything by John Caples, David Ogilvy, and Dan Rosenthal I could lay my hands on, Gary Bencivenga had already served a personal internship with each one of them.

When I was barely scraping by as a freelancer – writing ads for water heaters and local banks and dreaming about breaking into the super-lucrative financial publishing business – Gary ruled the roost, writing one blindingly brilliant control after another for the biggest mailers in the industry.

Gary doesn’t know it, of course, but in a very real way, he was my mentor. I spent a fortune I didn’t have at the time subscribing to every publication he promoted just to make sure I got samples of his promotion packages.

Whenever one of Gary’s inspired promotions arrived in my mailbox, it was a red-letter day: Like the Fourth of July, Thanksgiving, Christmas and New Year’s Day all rolled into one. Studying those Bencivenga controls taught me more – and made me more money – than all the books by all the great masters who had gone before combined!

So let’s dispense with hype and horsesh*t: Right now, the Internet is crawling with charlatans claiming to be the greatest copywriter alive – and then urging you to pay them a fortune for their books and courses. Many are complete frauds – scam artists who have never had a single hot control for a major mailer – looking to make a quick buck off of you.

Other self-proclaimed experts really have made millions writing copy – most of it aimed at selling their own books, courses and conferences, but rarely if ever competing against top writers in the real world.

Only a handful of copywriters in our generation have ever competed at anywhere near Gary Bencivenga’s level over the long haul. And if our little fraternity held an election today, Gary would be unanimously elected King. Gary showed us the way and we worship the ground he walks on.

And as a bonus, Gary is the nicest, sweetest, most humble, and the most generous guy you could ever hope to meet.

Yeah, I admit it: I genuinely love Gary. I want to marry him and have ALL his babies.

… So as you can imagine, it was an absolute thrill to spend a full 90 minutes picking his massive brain for ways to help you get bigger winners more often.

Here’s how it went …

  • USP Heresy: Why your obsession with the “Unique Selling Proposition” could be lowering your response …
  • Winning the Mind Game: How to quickly and easily program your mind to automatically create grand-slam ads for you …
  • No Pain, No Gain! The painful (and enormously profitable) secret for honing your sales copy to razor sharpness – and driving response rates through the ever-lovin’ roof!
  • “Yeah, Sure!” The two most dangerous words in your prospect’s mind – and the single best way to neutralize them …
  • The New Magalog: The next great direct response format breakthrough is already here – are you making the most of it?
  • Beyond Benefits: Why prospects don’t give a hoot about what you think you’re selling … and what to offer them instead to drive response rates sky-high …
  • And way too much more to list here!

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Posted by: Clayton Makepeace
April 10, 2006
Issue #38

25 Million Small Businesses
Eager to Grow …
1,000 Serious Copywriters …
YOU Do the Math!
(And other snippets
from the Cutting Room floor)

Dear Investor,

Happy birthday to me … happy birthday to me…

Since Thursday’s my b’day, I’m giving myself permission to write kind of a different issue this week. Instead of droning on for pages about a single subject, I’m going to give you some top-of-the-mind stuff about things I’m doing right now…

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Posted by: Clayton Makepeace
April 3, 2006
Issue #37

Billions of Dollars
of Marketing Research for Free

Skinny Latte':
$3.40 …

Biscotti:
$1.00 …

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How to turn a leisurely visit
to your local bookstore
into the most profitable
three hours of your entire year

Dear Business-Builder,

Good morning, Sunshine! And how was your weekend?

What’s that you say? You’re well-rested … brimming with energy and optimism … and eager to begin making this your best week ever?

Cool beans.

But please – for mercy’s sake – go put some clothes on. We’re going to the bookstore: One of the few places we copywriters and marketing folk probably should NOT work in our underwear!

I know – you assumed this issue would be just another one where I was going to preach about dominant emotion or benefits or some such stuff like that.

But frankly, I don’t feel like it today. Unlike some people I could name, I did not have the luxury of swilling beer and watching Survivor reruns all weekend.

In fact, I spent two full days sweating over every word on seven headline test panels. And I’m so close to this damn copywriting tree, all I can smell is bark.

I need to take a giant step back and get a good, long look at the salesmanship forest.

So let’s begin our week leisurely-like – savoring a Latte’ … maybe a biscotti … and three glorious hours of relaxed inspiration.

All you'll need is an open eye … an open mind … your trusty pen and a yellow pad … and of course, a couple of sawbucks for the Starbucks.

We’re headed down to the local Borders bookstore.

And be prepared to remove your shoes. For bretheren and sisteren, we are about to tread on Holy Ground …

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