Comments on: For killer copy – you need BULLETS! http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html Business-Building Secrets for Growth-Obsessed Companies Tue, 06 Jan 2009 06:40:33 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: Chu D. Obii http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html/comment-page-1/#comment-7881 Chu D. Obii Sun, 23 Nov 2008 15:16:59 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html#comment-7881 Thanks for that, great information - I look up your Copywriting bootcamp!! Chu Thanks for that, great information - I look up your Copywriting bootcamp!! Chu

]]> By: Roshawn http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html/comment-page-1/#comment-5834 Roshawn Wed, 30 Jul 2008 19:31:50 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html#comment-5834 Love this post.  Bullets rule!  :) Love this post.  Bullets rule!  :)

]]> By: Clarke Echols, resident scientist http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html/comment-page-1/#comment-5818 Clarke Echols, resident scientist Tue, 29 Jul 2008 22:24:08 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html#comment-5818 Bullets can be a real life saver.  When I'm writing books or web-site copy, I have found bullets the natural way to get rid of long, dense paragraphs.  Instead of six sentences, a lead-in and 5 bullets does it. Another powerful tool I love is the HTML definition list (dl, dt, dd tags). Anything to break solid copy out into little pieces that scanners won't skip over because you can use graphic design hooks to keep 'em involved. Bullets can be a real life saver.  When I’m writing books or web-site copy, I have found bullets the natural way to get rid of long, dense paragraphs.  Instead of six sentences, a lead-in and 5 bullets does it.

Another powerful tool I love is the HTML definition list (dl, dt, dd tags).

Anything to break solid copy out into little pieces that scanners won’t skip over because you can use graphic design hooks to keep ‘em involved.

]]> By: Carline http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html/comment-page-1/#comment-5816 Carline Tue, 29 Jul 2008 22:05:55 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html#comment-5816 Hiya folks, Glad you enjoyed the article -- but it's just the tip of the iceberg! In the upcoming Boot Camp on Steroids, we're going to put all the essential elements together and create a direct promo TOGETHER! Woo hoo -- can't wait! See you there! Carline Hiya folks,
Glad you enjoyed the article — but it’s just the tip of the iceberg! In the upcoming Boot Camp on Steroids, we’re going to put all the essential elements together and create a direct promo TOGETHER! Woo hoo — can’t wait! See you there!
Carline

]]> By: ****Rick http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html/comment-page-1/#comment-5814 ****Rick Tue, 29 Jul 2008 21:37:06 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html#comment-5814  Carline..... getting insight from you and Clayton  is great as usual....Like an Easter Egg Hunt (sans the eggs)..Sounds like your upcoming bootcamp will be awesome....  Carline….. getting insight from you and Clayton  is great as usual….Like an Easter Egg Hunt (sans the eggs)..Sounds like your upcoming bootcamp will be awesome….

]]> By: Cathy Sutter http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html/comment-page-1/#comment-5811 Cathy Sutter Tue, 29 Jul 2008 20:37:54 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html#comment-5811 OK, Carline...I need to get that book, whatever book you were writing about.  The first bullet stopped me in my tracks...guess that's the point, huh? I want to know how to turn OFF my fat genes -- for permanent weight loss!  Since <em>my</em> fat genes are cookin'...resulting in permanent weight gain or just plain stuck.  :( I'll be ready to arm myself with your bullets at your boot camp...it truly is a chance of a lifetime, as stated by Larry.  See ya there! Cathy OK, Carline…I need to get that book, whatever book you were writing about.  The first bullet stopped me in my tracks…guess that’s the point, huh?

I want to know how to turn OFF my fat genes — for permanent weight loss!  Since my fat genes are cookin’…resulting in permanent weight gain or just plain stuck.  :(

I’ll be ready to arm myself with your bullets at your boot camp…it truly is a chance of a lifetime, as stated by Larry.  See ya there!

Cathy

]]> By: John Osborn http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html/comment-page-1/#comment-5809 John Osborn Tue, 29 Jul 2008 19:46:34 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html#comment-5809 Now I understand why I have a complete library of Rodale books. Love the article and see how the bullets are so easy to read and plan to use them a great deal. Now I understand why I have a complete library of Rodale books. Love the article and see how the bullets are so easy to read and plan to use them a great deal.

]]> By: Jeff Baas http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html/comment-page-1/#comment-5808 Jeff Baas Tue, 29 Jul 2008 19:46:13 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html#comment-5808 Thanks, Carline! Great tips, as always! I especially love your tip about taking every fascinating fact you find in your research, jotting it down, and turning it into a bullet. So head-slappingly obvious but easy to overlook. Thanks again! Thanks, Carline!

Great tips, as always! I especially love your tip about taking every fascinating fact you find in your research, jotting it down, and turning it into a bullet. So head-slappingly obvious but easy to overlook. Thanks again!

]]> By: CHUKS http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html/comment-page-1/#comment-5804 CHUKS Tue, 29 Jul 2008 19:31:19 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html#comment-5804 Queen Of Copy----Thanks its a beautiful subject. Thanks a million. Chuks Uwaechia winstons dale limited Queen Of Copy—-Thanks its a beautiful subject. Thanks a million.

Chuks Uwaechia
winstons dale limited

]]> By: Matt http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html/comment-page-1/#comment-5802 Matt Tue, 29 Jul 2008 19:08:15 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/carline-anglade-cole/write-stronger-bullets.html#comment-5802 Ah fantastic, I'm writing some bullets as we speak, this will come in oh so very handy! Ah fantastic, I’m writing some bullets as we speak, this will come in oh so very handy!

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