Comments on: Conversation-Starters: How to Create Opening Copy that Sings and Soars http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/conversation-starters-how-to-create-opening-copy.html Business-Building Secrets for Growth-Obsessed Companies Tue, 06 Jan 2009 19:36:12 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: lawton chiles http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/conversation-starters-how-to-create-opening-copy.html/comment-page-1/#comment-441 lawton chiles Tue, 31 Jul 2007 09:11:45 +0000 #comment-441 Hello all: I had a quick question. What if it\'s in a sales letter. such as the following example: Boaters! Don’t Read This Letter If You Already Bought Your Condo! It’ll Break Your Heart! Here’s How To Save At Least $42,000 On Your Coastal Condo- Get Access To Our All–Inclusive Marina- Plus Use of A Boat Slip From the Desk of 10:34 A.M Dear Boating and Fishing Lover, ( this is where the fun and the hard part begin :) I could say, \"how do you think it would feel to tell your wife that you saved $x amount of dollars on your new condo? It would feel great! ETC Hello all: I had a quick question. What if it\’s in a sales letter. such as the following example:

Boaters! Don’t Read This Letter If You Already Bought Your Condo! It’ll Break Your Heart!

Here’s How To Save At Least $42,000
On Your Coastal Condo- Get Access To Our All–Inclusive Marina- Plus Use of A Boat Slip

From the Desk of
10:34 A.M

Dear Boating and Fishing Lover,

( this is where the fun and the hard part begin :)

I could say, \”how do you think it would feel to tell your wife that you saved $x amount of dollars on your new condo? It would feel great!

ETC

]]> By: Graham http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/conversation-starters-how-to-create-opening-copy.html/comment-page-1/#comment-437 Graham Mon, 30 Jul 2007 16:31:47 +0000 #comment-437 Pete, you should check out the Direct Marketing Forum. This is a place where you just might find out how your 2 for 1 offers can double your profits! Or you can meet just the person, like Paul, to make the mundane jump right off the page and grab your prospects by the short hairs. See you there soon![URL=null]null[/URL][URL=http://www.directresponsemarketingforum.com/]Clayton Makepeace\'s Direct Response Marketing Forum[/URL] Pete, you should check out the Direct Marketing Forum. This is a place where you just might find out how your 2 for 1 offers can double your profits! Or you can meet just the person, like Paul, to make the mundane jump right off the page and grab your prospects by the short hairs.

See you there soon![URL=null]null[/URL][URL=http://www.directresponsemarketingforum.com/]Clayton Makepeace\’s Direct Response Marketing Forum[/URL]

]]> By: Swans Paul http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/conversation-starters-how-to-create-opening-copy.html/comment-page-1/#comment-436 Swans Paul Mon, 30 Jul 2007 10:41:59 +0000 #comment-436 What about mundane/dull things? Your office supplies and consumables have drama in them. How do your products help the consumer? what problems do your products solve? Price is not everything. Do your office supplies save time? Save money? Save people from drudgery? This is where you find the drama---the human emotion---. Look for the benefits the prospect will get by buying your product. If you want more specific advice, why don\'t you fax me one of your ad about mondane products. Fax: 508-463-1320 What about mundane/dull things?

Your office supplies and consumables have drama in them. How do your products help the consumer? what problems do your products solve?

Price is not everything. Do your office supplies save time? Save money? Save people from drudgery?

This is where you find the drama—the human emotion—. Look for the benefits the prospect will get by buying your product.

If you want more specific advice, why don\’t you fax me one of your ad about mondane products. Fax: 508-463-1320

]]> By: Pete Stanbury http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/conversation-starters-how-to-create-opening-copy.html/comment-page-1/#comment-435 Pete Stanbury Mon, 30 Jul 2007 09:31:01 +0000 #comment-435 Hi I try to read all your emails and find some very helpful but what about mundane things? I don\\\'t have life changing products - I won\\\'t make you rich. I sell office machines and consumables. About the most exciting thing I can offer is a 2 for 1 deal on laminating pouches, or a package deal which takes the hassle away from having to order lots of bits or mega discounts when you buy in quantity! Any ideas would be welcome. Thanks Pete :? Hi
I try to read all your emails and find some very helpful but what about mundane things? I don\\\’t have life changing products - I won\\\’t make you rich. I sell office machines and consumables. About the most exciting thing I can offer is a 2 for 1 deal on laminating pouches, or a package deal which takes the hassle away from having to order lots of bits or mega discounts when you buy in quantity! Any ideas would be welcome.
Thanks
Pete :?

]]> By: Pete Stanbury http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/conversation-starters-how-to-create-opening-copy.html/comment-page-1/#comment-434 Pete Stanbury Mon, 30 Jul 2007 09:28:20 +0000 #comment-434 Hi I try to read all your emails and find some very helpful but what about mundane things? I don\'t have life changing products - I won\'t make you rich. I sell office machines and consumables. About the most exciting thing I can offer is a 2 for 1 deal on laminating pouches, or a package deal which takes the hassle away from having to order lots of bits or mega discounts when you buy in quantity! Any ideas would be welcome. Thanks Pete Hi
I try to read all your emails and find some very helpful but what about mundane things? I don\’t have life changing products - I won\’t make you rich. I sell office machines and consumables. About the most exciting thing I can offer is a 2 for 1 deal on laminating pouches, or a package deal which takes the hassle away from having to order lots of bits or mega discounts when you buy in quantity!
Any ideas would be welcome.
Thanks
Pete

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