Comments on: Grab Your Prospect by the Eyeballs! http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html Business-Building Secrets for Growth-Obsessed Companies Thu, 08 Jan 2009 16:53:50 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: The Rabbi of Response http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html/comment-page-1/#comment-7281 The Rabbi of Response Thu, 16 Oct 2008 14:27:15 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html#comment-7281 Ruth, I don't see what the problem is. Why don't you just try this: "How I almost overpaid $50,000 for the home of my dreams! But luckily I didn't... because I found the right broker! ...And how you can too!" Ruth, I don’t see what the problem is.

Why don’t you just try this:

“How I almost overpaid $50,000 for the home of my dreams! But luckily I didn’t… because I found the right broker! …And how you can too!”

]]> By: Copywriting Kid http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html/comment-page-1/#comment-4244 Copywriting Kid Fri, 27 Jun 2008 14:08:00 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html#comment-4244 <strong>“Legendary” Clayton Makepeace Finally Confesses: I Bribed My Way To The Top...</strong> Clayton Makepeace is celebrating (and he’s excusing himself for the champagne, confetti, and funny hats). He just beat a control that made the advertiser a 52.9% ROI with one that he wrote and boosted the ROI up to 169%. (Not bad, eh?) Now, he ch... “Legendary” Clayton Makepeace Finally Confesses: I Bribed My Way To The Top…

Clayton Makepeace is celebrating (and he’s excusing himself for the champagne, confetti, and funny hats).
He just beat a control that made the advertiser a 52.9% ROI with one that he wrote and boosted the ROI up to 169%.
(Not bad, eh?)
Now, he ch…

]]> By: Mike http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html/comment-page-1/#comment-4229 Mike Thu, 26 Jun 2008 15:43:41 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html#comment-4229 Ruth,Consider something like this quote headline..."I want to list my home with the BEST agent, but where do I begin?"Then go on and explain in the copy how listing works and how you do it better, with extra care, more experience, examples, etc.For selling homes, there are a lot of them for sale now of course...and not as many buyers, maybe try...Even if you've already looked at a LOT of homes, you may as well look at ONE MORE, because this one is REALLY good...Use this headline only if it's true for the particular property and then go on to explain how "different" this home is, and in how many different aspects, it's different. All of the differences, "make the difference", and are "really good". Ruth,Consider something like this quote headline…"I want to list my home with the BEST agent, but where do I begin?"Then go on and explain in the copy how listing works and how you do it better, with extra care, more experience, examples, etc.For selling homes, there are a lot of them for sale now of course…and not as many buyers, maybe try…Even if you’ve already looked at a LOT of homes, you may as well look at ONE MORE, because this one is REALLY good…Use this headline only if it’s true for the particular property and then go on to explain how "different" this home is, and in how many different aspects, it’s different. All of the differences, "make the difference", and are "really good".

]]> By: CHUKS http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html/comment-page-1/#comment-4228 CHUKS Thu, 26 Jun 2008 15:40:51 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html#comment-4228 Mr Clayton, I have build a big file from printing your articles. Your articles ar worth millions in my bank account. Knowledge is Power. Give us more. Thanks Chuks Uwaechia Ceo Winstondale Luxury Retailer Limited Mr Clayton,

I have build a big file from printing your articles. Your articles ar worth millions in my bank account. Knowledge is Power.
Give us more.

Thanks

Chuks Uwaechia
Ceo Winstondale Luxury Retailer Limited

]]> By: Kevin Tjia http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html/comment-page-1/#comment-2824 Kevin Tjia Tue, 06 May 2008 21:19:14 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html#comment-2824 I think that this article is great, and appareciate the work that Clayton & the Profit Center are doing here. I'd like to address Ruth's comment, if I may. Ruth you may want to try diclosing '7 Common Mistakes a Home Buyer Makes,' or turn it around and make it '7 Common Mistakes People Make When Selling Their Home.'  Do some research and ensure that it's factual, and then use it as a platform to generate interest.  'Give' the information away, for any investment into your potential clients will make them want to invest into you as well (at least more than the 'other guy' who isn't offering anything). Using the article above there are many more leads you can create with a home buying/selling atmosphere. I wish you luck, Kevin I think that this article is great, and appareciate the work that Clayton & the Profit Center are doing here.

I’d like to address Ruth’s comment, if I may.
Ruth you may want to try diclosing ‘7 Common Mistakes a Home Buyer Makes,’ or turn it around and make it ‘7 Common Mistakes People Make When Selling Their Home.’  Do some research and ensure that it’s factual, and then use it as a platform to generate interest.  ‘Give’ the information away, for any investment into your potential clients will make them want to invest into you as well (at least more than the ‘other guy’ who isn’t offering anything).

Using the article above there are many more leads you can create with a home buying/selling atmosphere.

I wish you luck,

Kevin

]]> By: Bob Heiney http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html/comment-page-1/#comment-1404 Bob Heiney Tue, 05 Feb 2008 12:50:56 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html#comment-1404 Every one of those headlines is a showstopper or perhaps an eyeball grabber. When I write copy, I write and rewrite the headline. Then I write it again. It\'s never good enough. And, if I decide to wait 24 hours and look at it again - well it\'s back again to - writing and rewriting. Clayton Makepeace - this is why you make the big bucks! Every one of those headlines is a showstopper or perhaps an eyeball grabber. When I write copy, I write and rewrite the headline. Then I write it again. It\’s never good enough. And, if I decide to wait 24 hours and look at it again - well it\’s back again to - writing and rewriting. Clayton Makepeace - this is why you make the big bucks!

]]> By: Catalin http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html/comment-page-1/#comment-1104 Catalin Tue, 15 Jan 2008 15:40:00 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html#comment-1104 Hi Clayton, I really think you have some teriffic stuff out there. I really apreaciate your content. Keep it going, Thanks :) Hi Clayton,
I really think you have some teriffic stuff out there. I really apreaciate your content.
Keep it going,
Thanks :)

]]> By: Tad Bowen http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html/comment-page-1/#comment-1081 Tad Bowen Fri, 11 Jan 2008 18:42:03 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html#comment-1081 Hmmm this seems really interesting i think i could actually do this and in answer to Dan I think i could help you out right now. But i dont know how to get in touch with anyone yet. Hmmm this seems really interesting i think i could actually do this and in answer to Dan I think i could help you out right now. But i dont know how to get in touch with anyone yet.

]]> By: Ruth Pangburn http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html/comment-page-1/#comment-1074 Ruth Pangburn Thu, 10 Jan 2008 08:09:12 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/grab-your-prospect-by-the-eyeballs.html#comment-1074 All your headlines and ideas sound good but I have a tough time relating them to real estate sales. Where can I find ideas to grab a buyer or seller to get a listing or promote a home for sale? All your headlines and ideas sound good but I have a tough time relating them to real estate sales. Where can I find ideas to grab a buyer or seller to get a listing or promote a home for sale?

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