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	<title>Comments on: The Death of Great Copywriting?</title>
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		<title>By: Brett</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/great-copywriting-enhances-your-launch.html#comment-6982</link>
		<dc:creator>Brett</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Oct 2008 17:10:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great (or even good?) copy is valuable ... as is a list, a good product, etc.

I'm a 'fast fan' of Clayton's, having just tripped across this site a month ago, but the information and value he puts across allows his emails to be read when most others are unsubscribed in a blink.  (Something I will aspire to!)

My comment above touches on my feeling that it's a whole system, right?  I (we / all of us) need great copy.  We also need a way to attract people (and targeted people at that) to our copy so they'll actually read it and, of course, once reading it, our product / service has to be good enough to make them glad they bought it.

Every step has to be worked on a perfected, as I guess Clayton touches on when he talks about how we works over each aspect of his 'launch' as if success depends on it.

The one thing I take from this article is what small change could you make to make a BIG difference?  (And don't stop asking that question.)

Best,
Brett.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great (or even good?) copy is valuable &#8230; as is a list, a good product, etc.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m a &#8216;fast fan&#8217; of Clayton&#8217;s, having just tripped across this site a month ago, but the information and value he puts across allows his emails to be read when most others are unsubscribed in a blink.  (Something I will aspire to!)</p>
<p>My comment above touches on my feeling that it&#8217;s a whole system, right?  I (we / all of us) need great copy.  We also need a way to attract people (and targeted people at that) to our copy so they&#8217;ll actually read it and, of course, once reading it, our product / service has to be good enough to make them glad they bought it.</p>
<p>Every step has to be worked on a perfected, as I guess Clayton touches on when he talks about how we works over each aspect of his &#8216;launch&#8217; as if success depends on it.</p>
<p>The one thing I take from this article is what small change could you make to make a BIG difference?  (And don&#8217;t stop asking that question.)</p>
<p>Best,<br />
Brett.</p>
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		<title>By: James Daniel Hendrix</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/great-copywriting-enhances-your-launch.html#comment-4263</link>
		<dc:creator>James Daniel Hendrix</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 28 Jun 2008 17:21:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I Guess I'm still a nobody.  Money always seems to be in my way.
Money this Money that.  For a Nobody,  Getting started in any
Business,  Requires Money.  I'm Just a Janator.  I make 298.00
every two wks.  My Bills Exceed My Paychecks.  So why am I
A nobody?  Well you can see why.  I Want to be rich,  But there seems to be A wall in my way.  But I will keep trying.  where their's A will there's A way.  To higher Profits, James D. Hendrix.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I Guess I&#8217;m still a nobody.  Money always seems to be in my way.<br />
Money this Money that.  For a Nobody,  Getting started in any<br />
Business,  Requires Money.  I&#8217;m Just a Janator.  I make 298.00<br />
every two wks.  My Bills Exceed My Paychecks.  So why am I<br />
A nobody?  Well you can see why.  I Want to be rich,  But there seems to be A wall in my way.  But I will keep trying.  where their&#8217;s A will there&#8217;s A way.  To higher Profits, James D. Hendrix.</p>
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		<title>By: Rick Carter</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/great-copywriting-enhances-your-launch.html#comment-4259</link>
		<dc:creator>Rick Carter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 28 Jun 2008 10:20:43 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/great-copywriting-enhances-your-launch.html#comment-4259</guid>
		<description>You know what group uses "great copy" and PLF all the time, because they know they work?
WIVES
Think about it. Which statement gets results:
"I need a new car."
-or-
"The car I drive is getting old and I'm think it's not safe anymore for the kids [BENEFIT, EMOTIONAL HOT BUTTON], and our budget says we can afford it [REDUCE RISK], and the neighbors just got a new Widget [SOCIAL PRESSURE], so let's go this weekend - you're off, right? [CONVENIENCE, CALL TO ACTION]."

And PLF starts when you say "Well, let's think about it." After a few weeks of "look at this ad" or "see, Jim and Jen say their kids are so stress-free in their new Whammo-mobile" that you eventually cave and buy that new car. 

So I put forth that it's not even open for discussion. Great copy will get get results every time. Talk to your wife about it. She'll explain it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You know what group uses &#8220;great copy&#8221; and PLF all the time, because they know they work?<br />
WIVES<br />
Think about it. Which statement gets results:<br />
&#8220;I need a new car.&#8221;<br />
-or-<br />
&#8220;The car I drive is getting old and I&#8217;m think it&#8217;s not safe anymore for the kids [BENEFIT, EMOTIONAL HOT BUTTON], and our budget says we can afford it [REDUCE RISK], and the neighbors just got a new Widget [SOCIAL PRESSURE], so let&#8217;s go this weekend - you&#8217;re off, right? [CONVENIENCE, CALL TO ACTION].&#8221;</p>
<p>And PLF starts when you say &#8220;Well, let&#8217;s think about it.&#8221; After a few weeks of &#8220;look at this ad&#8221; or &#8220;see, Jim and Jen say their kids are so stress-free in their new Whammo-mobile&#8221; that you eventually cave and buy that new car. </p>
<p>So I put forth that it&#8217;s not even open for discussion. Great copy will get get results every time. Talk to your wife about it. She&#8217;ll explain it!</p>
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		<title>By: James</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/great-copywriting-enhances-your-launch.html#comment-4247</link>
		<dc:creator>James</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jun 2008 17:05:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;strong&gt;I have a new site up and would appreciate any comments that might help a newbie claw his way
up. I think this forum is a great place to cut your
teeth so to speak, I learn something everytime I
log on. Please everybody keep up the fantastic work.

Regards,
James

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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>I have a new site up and would appreciate any comments that might help a newbie claw his way<br />
up. I think this forum is a great place to cut your<br />
teeth so to speak, I learn something everytime I<br />
log on. Please everybody keep up the fantastic work.</p>
<p>Regards,<br />
James</p>
<p></strong></p>
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		<title>By: Michelle Kapty</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/great-copywriting-enhances-your-launch.html#comment-3912</link>
		<dc:creator>Michelle Kapty</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Jun 2008 22:23:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tom, 
if your comment to Clayton about taking an idea from a better man then editing it and not being found out  was directed at me, here's my response to you:

Jeff stated in his first 3 minute clip that I ever received about his PLF was that he was giving his clips out for FREE to help offer everyone some new ideas to help them generate more leads.  I have not created my own software based on his ideas or anything close to that because I've never seen his end product.  He talks about creating a squeeze page and maybe doing some pre-release emails to your list, prior to a launch of any kind.  Beyond that, I don't know what or how he does it all.  I've simply taken some of his thoughts and added them to the IM expereince that I already have learned over the last few years,  and have polished up my strategies, that I came up with that work for my business.    I could care less how anyone else makes his info work for thier business.  I saw a total of 4 - 2 or 3 minute clips, and read his emails.   There was nothing to edit or take away from him.  I simply used what he did offer for free and worked it in with my own methods I already use.  And I'm sure I'm not the only one who did.  That's why he offered those little tidbits for free.  To help.  He understood that not everyone can afford to purchase at that exact time.
If someone is capable of reading between the lines of a 2 minute clip, that means they already know more than most do.  Nothing wrong with that.  That's what he gave the info out for.

And I was joking about not telling him.  Sheesh.  I already gave him my thoughts about it and thanked him months ago.   So it's all good.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tom,<br />
if your comment to Clayton about taking an idea from a better man then editing it and not being found out  was directed at me, here&#8217;s my response to you:</p>
<p>Jeff stated in his first 3 minute clip that I ever received about his PLF was that he was giving his clips out for FREE to help offer everyone some new ideas to help them generate more leads.  I have not created my own software based on his ideas or anything close to that because I&#8217;ve never seen his end product.  He talks about creating a squeeze page and maybe doing some pre-release emails to your list, prior to a launch of any kind.  Beyond that, I don&#8217;t know what or how he does it all.  I&#8217;ve simply taken some of his thoughts and added them to the IM expereince that I already have learned over the last few years,  and have polished up my strategies, that I came up with that work for my business.    I could care less how anyone else makes his info work for thier business.  I saw a total of 4 - 2 or 3 minute clips, and read his emails.   There was nothing to edit or take away from him.  I simply used what he did offer for free and worked it in with my own methods I already use.  And I&#8217;m sure I&#8217;m not the only one who did.  That&#8217;s why he offered those little tidbits for free.  To help.  He understood that not everyone can afford to purchase at that exact time.<br />
If someone is capable of reading between the lines of a 2 minute clip, that means they already know more than most do.  Nothing wrong with that.  That&#8217;s what he gave the info out for.</p>
<p>And I was joking about not telling him.  Sheesh.  I already gave him my thoughts about it and thanked him months ago.   So it&#8217;s all good.</p>
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		<title>By: Gerard LeBlond</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/great-copywriting-enhances-your-launch.html#comment-3911</link>
		<dc:creator>Gerard LeBlond</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Jun 2008 21:48:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Product launches have been, and are currently,  used in the pharmaceutical and automotive industries as standard practice.Apple, IBM, Xerox, Sony, Yves St. Laurent, Jeff Koons, Disney and McDonalds are big in launching new products.So, the idea behind &#34;Product Launches&#34; isn't new... but, the way Jeff Walker packaged it for online entrepreneurs was new insofar as most online marketers used &#34;seat-of-the-pants&#34; marketing and had no idea of the power that a great strategy with a heavy toolkit full of marketing tactics could give them.Jeff worked hard and smart. He laid out a time honored marketing strategy in a way that fit nicely for online selling and electron-fast communication of the internet.Nice step-by-step plans are always appreciated by solutions minded marketers, whether novices or experts.In fact, the Product Launch Formula basically takes Dan Kennedy's sequential mailing direct response communication methods (which he explained in his &#34;Magnetic Marketing&#34; course) and applied it to the internet of the 2000s.But, as Clayton said, nothing beats top quality copy when it comes to persuasive communication and getting people to make the decision to trust you enough to place an order.Best regards,Gerard LeBlond </description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Product launches have been, and are currently,  used in the pharmaceutical and automotive industries as standard practice.Apple, IBM, Xerox, Sony, Yves St. Laurent, Jeff Koons, Disney and McDonalds are big in launching new products.So, the idea behind &quot;Product Launches&quot; isn&#8217;t new&#8230; but, the way Jeff Walker packaged it for online entrepreneurs was new insofar as most online marketers used &quot;seat-of-the-pants&quot; marketing and had no idea of the power that a great strategy with a heavy toolkit full of marketing tactics could give them.Jeff worked hard and smart. He laid out a time honored marketing strategy in a way that fit nicely for online selling and electron-fast communication of the internet.Nice step-by-step plans are always appreciated by solutions minded marketers, whether novices or experts.In fact, the Product Launch Formula basically takes Dan Kennedy&#8217;s sequential mailing direct response communication methods (which he explained in his &quot;Magnetic Marketing&quot; course) and applied it to the internet of the 2000s.But, as Clayton said, nothing beats top quality copy when it comes to persuasive communication and getting people to make the decision to trust you enough to place an order.Best regards,Gerard LeBlond </p>
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		<title>By: David Grebow</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/great-copywriting-enhances-your-launch.html#comment-3910</link>
		<dc:creator>David Grebow</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Jun 2008 21:44:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I had a printed piece of paper taped over my desk. It said in bold letters

&lt;strong&gt;&#34;When Times Are Tough, That's When You 
Really Need A Great Copywriter&#34;
&lt;/strong&gt;
After reading your post, Clayton, and the Tony Flores &lt;em&gt;&lt;a href="../copywriting-coach/" rel="nofollow" target="_blank"&gt;The  Great Copywriting Conspiracy&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/em&gt; , I tore the page off my wall ...

... and framed it.

Seems like everyone is missing the critical part of the copywriting equation. Some call it &lt;strong&gt;imagination&lt;/strong&gt;, others &lt;strong&gt;creativity&lt;/strong&gt;. No matter what you call it, THAT is the secret to great copywriting ...  and if there's any conspiracy, it's telling people who have neither, that they can skip over Copywriting 101, and sell like Crazy Eddy on the Internet. 

They also might as well forget everything they learned in English class. They probably already have, since most of the people using PLF 2.0 cannot even  write a simple declarative sentence (and if you don't know what that means, I'm talking about you, Oh Mighty Genius).

Lucky for them the templates are already done...

Next we'll have Product Launch Robot V 1.0 taking the place of salespeople. After all, what's copywriting but selling with words ... and if I can do it with software on the internet, I can do it in the real world with a robot.

Good or great copywriting requires a mind that  can &lt;em&gt;imagine&lt;/em&gt; the person to whom you are selling. Good or great copywriting demands&lt;em&gt; creativity&lt;/em&gt; to be able to respond to the times in which we live.

Oh crapola, here comes another REALLY bad economic downturn. Quick, it's PLF 2.0 to the rescue.  Plug it in and just watch sales soar...

... right out of site ... into the deep dark sea of red ink.

Like the now framed words say, when times are tough, that's when you need a really great copywriter. Actually, now that I think about it, good to great human generated copy trumps software anytime.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I had a printed piece of paper taped over my desk. It said in bold letters</p>
<p><strong>&quot;When Times Are Tough, That&#8217;s When You<br />
Really Need A Great Copywriter&quot;<br />
</strong><br />
After reading your post, Clayton, and the Tony Flores <em><a href="../copywriting-coach/" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">The  Great Copywriting Conspiracy</a></em> , I tore the page off my wall &#8230;</p>
<p>&#8230; and framed it.</p>
<p>Seems like everyone is missing the critical part of the copywriting equation. Some call it <strong>imagination</strong>, others <strong>creativity</strong>. No matter what you call it, THAT is the secret to great copywriting &#8230;  and if there&#8217;s any conspiracy, it&#8217;s telling people who have neither, that they can skip over Copywriting 101, and sell like Crazy Eddy on the Internet. </p>
<p>They also might as well forget everything they learned in English class. They probably already have, since most of the people using PLF 2.0 cannot even  write a simple declarative sentence (and if you don&#8217;t know what that means, I&#8217;m talking about you, Oh Mighty Genius).</p>
<p>Lucky for them the templates are already done&#8230;</p>
<p>Next we&#8217;ll have Product Launch Robot V 1.0 taking the place of salespeople. After all, what&#8217;s copywriting but selling with words &#8230; and if I can do it with software on the internet, I can do it in the real world with a robot.</p>
<p>Good or great copywriting requires a mind that  can <em>imagine</em> the person to whom you are selling. Good or great copywriting demands<em> creativity</em> to be able to respond to the times in which we live.</p>
<p>Oh crapola, here comes another REALLY bad economic downturn. Quick, it&#8217;s PLF 2.0 to the rescue.  Plug it in and just watch sales soar&#8230;</p>
<p>&#8230; right out of site &#8230; into the deep dark sea of red ink.</p>
<p>Like the now framed words say, when times are tough, that&#8217;s when you need a really great copywriter. Actually, now that I think about it, good to great human generated copy trumps software anytime.</p>
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		<title>By: Lenny Eng</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/great-copywriting-enhances-your-launch.html#comment-3876</link>
		<dc:creator>Lenny Eng</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Jun 2008 13:45:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think one thing you are truly missing here is the value of an existing relationship... conversion averages to a cold email list are around 0.3% while averages to a warm email list are somewhere around 2-5%...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think one thing you are truly missing here is the value of an existing relationship&#8230; conversion averages to a cold email list are around 0.3% while averages to a warm email list are somewhere around 2-5%&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Seth Chong</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/great-copywriting-enhances-your-launch.html#comment-3875</link>
		<dc:creator>Seth Chong</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Jun 2008 12:59:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tony is in fact, legendary right out of the bag...

With your guidance Clayton.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tony is in fact, legendary right out of the bag&#8230;</p>
<p>With your guidance Clayton.</p>
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		<title>By: Clayton Makepeace</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/great-copywriting-enhances-your-launch.html#comment-3873</link>
		<dc:creator>Clayton Makepeace</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Jun 2008 11:09:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You know you've got a winner when Bob Hutchinson -- a former copy cub of mine who's gone on to make millions in royalties on his own -- says TONY is a better teacher than I am!

Thanks for pointing that out, Bobber ... you are 100% correctomundo!

-- Clayton</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You know you&#8217;ve got a winner when Bob Hutchinson &#8211; a former copy cub of mine who&#8217;s gone on to make millions in royalties on his own &#8211; says TONY is a better teacher than I am!</p>
<p>Thanks for pointing that out, Bobber &#8230; you are 100% correctomundo!</p>
<p>&#8211; Clayton</p>
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