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		<title>By: Alan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Aug 2010 10:25:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is awesome...

(Is your first name "THE"?, Ms Readhead?)

Maybe it's a rerun, but most peolpe won't tune in every time and today I did cos I needed inspiration.

That did the trick.

When you know the basics and you just need some inspiration as to the tone to set in an article, reading Claytons "Stuff" does the job.

I can rock on the bass guitar, but to get in state, I may watch Victa Wooten or someone.  This is no different.

Thanks Clayton and "The", ...and Joe, sometimes humility is received better than "Smart-arse-ility". 

When you reach the point when you know something but don't feel the need to say anything, you are close to being a grown up.

Rock n roll</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is awesome&#8230;</p>
<p>(Is your first name &#8220;THE&#8221;?, Ms Readhead?)</p>
<p>Maybe it&#8217;s a rerun, but most peolpe won&#8217;t tune in every time and today I did cos I needed inspiration.</p>
<p>That did the trick.</p>
<p>When you know the basics and you just need some inspiration as to the tone to set in an article, reading Claytons &#8220;Stuff&#8221; does the job.</p>
<p>I can rock on the bass guitar, but to get in state, I may watch Victa Wooten or someone.  This is no different.</p>
<p>Thanks Clayton and &#8220;The&#8221;, &#8230;and Joe, sometimes humility is received better than &#8220;Smart-arse-ility&#8221;. </p>
<p>When you reach the point when you know something but don&#8217;t feel the need to say anything, you are close to being a grown up.</p>
<p>Rock n roll</p>
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		<title>By: Wendy Makepeace</title>
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		<dc:creator>Wendy Makepeace</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 24 May 2010 13:11:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>OK, you guys caught me!  From time to time I republish one of Clayton's older articles.  As you may or may not know, Clayton is a working copywriter just like many of you are... and, well...clients come first because that's how we pay our bills. 

The Total Package is a labor of love for Clayton and he loves that it provides him the opportunity to help so many people conquer their dreams or introduce them to an entirely new career in direct response marketing. But, we personally don't actually make any money from The Total Package.  All of the product sales that we do make go to pay for the staff to put out TTP and reinvest back into finding new subscribers.  

So, the answer to Joe's question is no...Clayton has not retired...but, we work around his very busy schedule. Plus, many of his Total Package articles haven't been republished in years...and there are so many great articles that I feel compelled to bring them to the forefront again....

Thanks for understanding!

The Redhead</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OK, you guys caught me!  From time to time I republish one of Clayton&#8217;s older articles.  As you may or may not know, Clayton is a working copywriter just like many of you are&#8230; and, well&#8230;clients come first because that&#8217;s how we pay our bills. </p>
<p>The Total Package is a labor of love for Clayton and he loves that it provides him the opportunity to help so many people conquer their dreams or introduce them to an entirely new career in direct response marketing. But, we personally don&#8217;t actually make any money from The Total Package.  All of the product sales that we do make go to pay for the staff to put out TTP and reinvest back into finding new subscribers.  </p>
<p>So, the answer to Joe&#8217;s question is no&#8230;Clayton has not retired&#8230;but, we work around his very busy schedule. Plus, many of his Total Package articles haven&#8217;t been republished in years&#8230;and there are so many great articles that I feel compelled to bring them to the forefront again&#8230;.</p>
<p>Thanks for understanding!</p>
<p>The Redhead</p>
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		<title>By: Mike Hunt</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mike Hunt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 24 May 2010 00:57:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well done Joe.  This ride was well before Clayton quit smoking.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well done Joe.  This ride was well before Clayton quit smoking.</p>
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		<title>By: Dean</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dean</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 May 2010 01:14:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lots of income producing tips as usual.

I was most interested in your last one, as it makes perfect sense, but is in direct conflict with what most of the online "gurus" are preaching.

I know who's advice I will be testing :)

Cheers,
Dean.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lots of income producing tips as usual.</p>
<p>I was most interested in your last one, as it makes perfect sense, but is in direct conflict with what most of the online &#8220;gurus&#8221; are preaching.</p>
<p>I know who&#8217;s advice I will be testing <img src='http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Cheers,<br />
Dean.</p>
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		<title>By: Terry Bullock</title>
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		<dc:creator>Terry Bullock</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 May 2010 20:26:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Can you ad my mail address to your website?  Thank you.  I work for a small town newspaper in Sebring, Florida.  This was e-mailed to me by one of my advertisers.  This information was so GREATLY appreciated.
Terry Bullock
Heartland Sun Times Newspaper
Sebring, Florida</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Can you ad my mail address to your website?  Thank you.  I work for a small town newspaper in Sebring, Florida.  This was e-mailed to me by one of my advertisers.  This information was so GREATLY appreciated.<br />
Terry Bullock<br />
Heartland Sun Times Newspaper<br />
Sebring, Florida</p>
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		<title>By: John Kirk</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Kirk</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 May 2010 21:54:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Clayton

You know, I really wanted to join you on that Harley ride by the time you finished the story. Despite the cold and wet and dirt and heat and those crazy mother truckers trying to kill you! And I'm sure I've met that croupier girl (or her sister).

And that was before the really good stuff. Great copy, great info. I'll sure use it.

I found you by accident (fate?) by clicking a link in Steve Johns' newsletter that caught my eye (thanks Steve). You're bookmarked Clayton and I'll be back!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Clayton</p>
<p>You know, I really wanted to join you on that Harley ride by the time you finished the story. Despite the cold and wet and dirt and heat and those crazy mother truckers trying to kill you! And I&#8217;m sure I&#8217;ve met that croupier girl (or her sister).</p>
<p>And that was before the really good stuff. Great copy, great info. I&#8217;ll sure use it.</p>
<p>I found you by accident (fate?) by clicking a link in Steve Johns&#8217; newsletter that caught my eye (thanks Steve). You&#8217;re bookmarked Clayton and I&#8217;ll be back!</p>
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		<title>By: Joe</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joe</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 May 2010 17:23:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Has Clayton Retired? Haven't heard anyting new in awhile from the ol' wise one. 

Though the past stuff never gets too old to read and learn from. But do miss his fresh thoughts and irreverent take on things current. Hey, I've been spoiled.

Regards,
Joe</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Has Clayton Retired? Haven&#8217;t heard anyting new in awhile from the ol&#8217; wise one. </p>
<p>Though the past stuff never gets too old to read and learn from. But do miss his fresh thoughts and irreverent take on things current. Hey, I&#8217;ve been spoiled.</p>
<p>Regards,<br />
Joe</p>
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		<title>By: JT Chandler</title>
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		<dc:creator>JT Chandler</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 May 2010 14:32:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Clayton,
"Make it effortless" Now there's a subject... maybe even a headline.

And on that note... 

Clayton please link your email tease with the actual article rather than the home page. If your readers have an accumulation of Makepeace masterpieces in their email file (as i do) and wish to reread or share it. It's no fun and a bit confusing to not be directly linked to the article in question. Thanks</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Clayton,<br />
&#8220;Make it effortless&#8221; Now there&#8217;s a subject&#8230; maybe even a headline.</p>
<p>And on that note&#8230; </p>
<p>Clayton please link your email tease with the actual article rather than the home page. If your readers have an accumulation of Makepeace masterpieces in their email file (as i do) and wish to reread or share it. It&#8217;s no fun and a bit confusing to not be directly linked to the article in question. Thanks</p>
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		<title>By: Ed - computer repair los angeles</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ed - computer repair los angeles</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 May 2010 13:32:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>great insights and style thank you</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>great insights and style thank you</p>
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		<title>By: Rezbi</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rezbi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 18 May 2010 08:34:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Another great article.

This is what I like - real, immediately usable, to-the-point information.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Another great article.</p>
<p>This is what I like - real, immediately usable, to-the-point information.</p>
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