Comments on: Solving the Marketing Model Mystery http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/solving-the-marketing-model-mystery.html Business-Building Secrets for Growth-Obsessed Companies Thu, 20 Nov 2008 14:03:05 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.3.3 By: Brandon Clay http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/solving-the-marketing-model-mystery.html#comment-596 Brandon Clay Tue, 25 Sep 2007 07:38:48 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/solving-the-marketing-model-mystery.html#comment-596 Strategy before execution - beautiful post. We\'re working on the same sort of thing at my company. Imitating the best is a great first step to success. Keep up the great info, Clayton. Have a great week! Brandon Strategy before execution - beautiful post. We\’re working on the same sort of thing at my company. Imitating the best is a great first step to success. Keep up the great info, Clayton.

Have a great week!

Brandon

]]> By: Aaron http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/solving-the-marketing-model-mystery.html#comment-595 Aaron Mon, 24 Sep 2007 13:13:19 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/solving-the-marketing-model-mystery.html#comment-595 Hey Clayton, Thank you so much for today\'s post. I\'m the copywriter you are talking about, and I\'m so thankful for your wisdom, insight and encouragement. I actually forwarded a copy of this 16 page sales letter to Carline Anglade-Cole, and this is what she had to say, \"I read your first sample -- nice job. Copy was interesting and flowed pretty well.\" Getting critiques from you guys is just great, and I\'m so thankful for you both. Just for your readers sake, below is the headline and lead into the package. There is of course layout issues between this comment, and the actual sales letter, so it won\'t look the same: [B]PERSONAL TRAINING AS YOU KNOW IT IS DEAD. [/B] Get ready for massive financial gains of 262%... 600%... up to 1,376% and MORE, just like your peers are doing, now that they\'ve hit the Personal Trainers [B]JACKPOT [/B] \"Clayton Makepeace... Give me 36 months and I\'ll make you $400,000 richer!\" Read the enclosed intelligence report now to discover the proven step-by-step system that will turn your personal training skills into $200,000... $300,000... up to $400,000 or even MORE! Dear Clayton, Think it’s impossible to make $200,000… $300,000… up to $400,000 per year or more as a Personal Trainer? Try to tell that to the trainers who listened to my advice and became the envy of their peers, their competition and their bankers! For example: Aaron Crocker’s take-home income skyrocketed 262%: By blasting off from $29,000 to $105,000 in 12 months flat! Aaron’s income jumped again the 2nd year 93%: By rocketing from $105,000 to $203,000… a 600% gain over year one! Aaron’s income exploded yet again the 3rd year 96%: By exploding from $205,000 to $399,000 in only his 3rd year… a shocking 1376% gain from year one! David Jone’s take-home income jumped 485.7%: By bolting from $3,500 to $20,500 in only one month! David’s impressive record continued as his training sales jumped 243.33%: And he literally stunned the personal training world by increasing his sales from $30,000 to… “…$103,000… in a single month!” Well... That was the lead. One clarification may need to be made... While the franchise cost is between $150K-$200K, the price of the franchise is never mentioned in the sales letter. Clayton, again... thank you for everything. I really mean that! I love this newsletter. Aaron Hey Clayton,

Thank you so much for today\’s post. I\’m the copywriter you are talking about, and I\’m so thankful for your wisdom, insight and encouragement.

I actually forwarded a copy of this 16 page sales letter to Carline Anglade-Cole, and this is what she had to say, \”I read your first sample – nice job. Copy was interesting and flowed pretty well.\”

Getting critiques from you guys is just great, and I\’m so thankful for you both.

Just for your readers sake, below is the headline and lead into the package. There is of course layout issues between this comment, and the actual sales letter, so it won\’t look the same:

[B]PERSONAL TRAINING AS YOU KNOW IT IS DEAD. [/B]

Get ready for massive financial gains of 262%… 600%… up to 1,376% and MORE, just like your peers are doing, now that they\’ve hit the Personal Trainers

[B]JACKPOT [/B]

\”Clayton Makepeace… Give me 36 months and I\’ll make you $400,000 richer!\”

Read the enclosed intelligence report now to discover the proven step-by-step system that will turn your personal training skills into $200,000… $300,000… up to $400,000 or even MORE!

Dear Clayton,

Think it’s impossible to make $200,000… $300,000… up to $400,000 per year or more as a Personal Trainer?

Try to tell that to the trainers who listened to my advice and became the envy of their peers, their competition and their bankers! For example:

Aaron Crocker’s take-home income skyrocketed 262%: By blasting off from $29,000 to $105,000 in 12 months flat!

Aaron’s income jumped again the 2nd year 93%: By rocketing from $105,000 to $203,000… a 600% gain over year one!

Aaron’s income exploded yet again the 3rd year 96%: By exploding from $205,000 to $399,000 in only his 3rd year… a shocking 1376% gain from year one!

David Jone’s take-home income jumped 485.7%: By bolting from $3,500 to $20,500 in only one month!

David’s impressive record continued as his training sales jumped 243.33%: And he literally stunned the personal training world by increasing his sales from $30,000 to…

“…$103,000…
in a single month!”

Well… That was the lead.

One clarification may need to be made… While the franchise cost is between $150K-$200K, the price of the franchise is never mentioned in the sales letter.

Clayton, again… thank you for everything. I really mean that! I love this newsletter.

Aaron

]]> By: Geoff Bryan http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/solving-the-marketing-model-mystery.html#comment-594 Geoff Bryan Mon, 24 Sep 2007 10:22:10 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/solving-the-marketing-model-mystery.html#comment-594 Clayton -- I always get that \"bonk\" like the V-8 commercials every time I read one of your pieces like this. It seems so simple and obvious when you lay it out this way, but we often get swept up in the excitement and forget the fundamentals. Thanks. G Clayton –

I always get that \”bonk\” like the V-8 commercials every time I read one of your pieces like this. It seems so simple and obvious when you lay it out this way, but we often get swept up in the excitement and forget the fundamentals. Thanks.

G

]]> By: Ron http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/solving-the-marketing-model-mystery.html#comment-593 Ron Mon, 24 Sep 2007 09:50:19 +0000 http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/clayton-makepeace/solving-the-marketing-model-mystery.html#comment-593 Clayton, Great piece. You should be hiring yourself out as a consultant, you are THE TOTAL PACKAGE. Keep up the great work. Clayton,

Great piece. You should be hiring yourself out as a consultant, you are THE TOTAL PACKAGE. Keep up the great work.

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