Posted by:
Daniel Levis
September 3, 2008
Issue #495
Dear Web Business-Builder,
The ink was barely dry on transcripts of Obama’s “I have a dream” acceptance speech when McCain stole the spotlight entirely by selecting a gun-toting soccer Mom as his running mate who hales from a state where few people live.
Minority groups across America rejoice. Even rich old white men concede — equal opportunity for all, the glass ceiling is shattered forever!
Let’s take a little informal poll shall we?
Who thinks Barrack Obama is going to wipe the floor with John McCain?
Who thinks McCain will prevail?
Regardless of the outcome (of the election that is), I can guarantee we’re in for the ultimate flying circus of political theater in the weeks ahead. And the decision will have very little to do with the issues.
America will decide who it likes most … and that person will move into the White House.
“An entire party, a platform, an international policy, is sold to the public — or is not sold — on the basis of the intangible element of personality”
– Edward Bernays
The electorate will listen to the speeches and the debates and forget pretty much everything that was said. But they will remember how they felt about the candidates while watching and listening, and vote accordingly.
Elections are, by and large, popularity contests dressed up as debates.
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Posted by:
Carline Anglade-Cole
August 26, 2008
Issue #488
Man, I really goofed!
I mean, I recently made a DUMB mistake – and it cost me over a thousand bucks!
But thanks to knowing an amazing secret, I was able to recoup my loss and even save face.
What’s the secret?
Knowing the POWER of the written letter!
Here’s what happened …
I made plans to fly to Washington, D.C to pick up Alexis, Paris and Elliott – my nieces and nephew so they can spend some of their summer vacation with my family.
I would fly up early Tuesday morning, meet their folks at the airport, scoop up the kiddies and fly back to Atlanta the same afternoon. Simple, right?
Well … not really. Turns out I made a big mistake – and I didn’t find out about it until the very last minute.
But wait.
The theme of this article is the power of a letter. So, let me allow the letter tell you what happened …
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Posted by:
Gary Bencivenga
August 19, 2008
Issue #484
Dear Marketing Top Gun:
My friends, star marketers Alex Mandossian and Yanik Silver, recently paid me a compliment by calling me, "The world’s greatest living reason-why copywriter."
I consider it such high praise because my mentor, David Ogilvy, was in my view the greatest reason-why copywriter of all time. In fact, when asked by a reporter if he was a strong proponent of "reason why" advertising, Ogilvy responded, "Is there any other kind?"
Thinking of Mr. Ogilvy (or "D. O.," as we staffers at Ogilvy & Mather called him) has prompted me to once again offend every English teacher whose classes I endured, and inspire everyone else who speaks the King’s English to cringe, by penning another of my infamous poems, this one entitled …
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Posted by:
Clayton Makepeace
August 4, 2008
Issue #473
How to write better sales copy, faster.
Dear Business-Builder,
Short one today.
As you read this, I’m up to my eyeballs in what’s commonly known as “Family Time.”
Last Friday, The Redhead, my 15-year-old daughter and my 14-year-old son surrendered our dignity to the Department of Homeland Security … clambered into four First-Class seats on a Delta jet in Atlanta … endured the 4 ½ hour non-stop to San Francisco … rented a dorky minivan (aargh!) … and after a couple of days of sightseeing, began slowly winding our way south.
So far, we’ve spent one night in Atlanta, two nights in San Francisco and we bunked last night in Menlo Park. Today, we’re doing The Redwoods, Santa Cruz, Monterey and tonight we will collapse, exhausted, I’m sure, in Carmel.
Tomorrow, it’s on to San Luis Obispo and not one, but two tours of Hearst Castle … the next day, Santa Barbara and the beach. Then, it’s three nights at Raffles L’Ermitage in Beverly Hills.
If you need me, I’ll be in the bar. And if I know me, I’ll be nursing a double Grey Goose on the rocks.
So, since none of this has actually happened yet (it’s still last Tuesday, my time), and since I have a ream of copy still to do for my clients and another ream to finish up for my own products PLUS a webinar to prepare for my beloved EasyWriters Marketing Club (membership: Closed!) before I head out …
I’m going to cut right to the chase …
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Posted by:
Carline Anglade-Cole
July 29, 2008
Issue #469
I love bullets!
They’re fun - and easy to write once you get the hang of ‘em!
In this issue, I’m going to show you some of my secrets for writing powerful, strong and kick-butt bullets! Once you learn my tricks, feel free to start using them immediately. You’ll see how your copy just POPS, flows and takes off!
An easy way to create momentum in your copy:
Faster than a speeding (you know the rest) …
In case you’re not sure what I’m blabbering about, here’s how I define a bullet:
"A mini headline followed by strong supporting sentence aimed to tease and entice your prospect."
Bullets help you create momentum in your copy. And since most people scan instead of read - bullets can help you quickly drive home the points you want your prospect to remember.
I love working for clients like Boardroom, Rodale and Frank Cawood & Associates. These guys really appreciate the value of bullets. In fact, for their style of copy - bullets are KING! Here’s how I tackle writing a sales letter for them:
When I read their book, I turn every interesting fact or "fascination" I discover into a bullet. By the time I’m finished with the book, I’ve usually written well over 100 bullets.
Then I break up the bullets in groups of 10 to 15 … add a few paragraphs of copy … drop in another 10 to 15 bullets … do that for several more times … add a few subheads … and voila - my letter practically writes itself!
Here are five ways to give your bullets a powerful punch. And take a look at the examples for each. They’re actual bullets I wrote for a Boardroom Bottom Line Health promo:
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