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	<title>Comments on: When Copywriting Formulas Come Up Short Here&#8217;s What To Do&#160;&#8230;</title>
	<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/john-forde/when-copywriting-formulas-come-up-short-heres-what-to-do.html</link>
	<description>Business-Building Secrets for Growth-Obsessed Companies</description>
	<pubDate>Fri, 21 Nov 2008 03:35:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Sarah Clachar, natural health copywriter</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/john-forde/when-copywriting-formulas-come-up-short-heres-what-to-do.html#comment-2676</link>
		<dc:creator>Sarah Clachar, natural health copywriter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Apr 2008 15:36:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>John,

This is great!  So often I get enmeshed in my copy - having a way to pull back and assess it tactically is very welcomed - not to mention that it frees me up to dive deep in the first draft without as many editors sitting on my shoulder for that round.

Other tip that I use - read it to your kids or distracted spouse and see what keeps their attention and what loses it:  Tough test.

Sarah Clachar, health copywriter</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John,</p>
<p>This is great!  So often I get enmeshed in my copy - having a way to pull back and assess it tactically is very welcomed - not to mention that it frees me up to dive deep in the first draft without as many editors sitting on my shoulder for that round.</p>
<p>Other tip that I use - read it to your kids or distracted spouse and see what keeps their attention and what loses it:  Tough test.</p>
<p>Sarah Clachar, health copywriter</p>
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		<title>By: nita</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/john-forde/when-copywriting-formulas-come-up-short-heres-what-to-do.html#comment-2670</link>
		<dc:creator>nita</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Apr 2008 13:06:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>hi,
the advice was great.
I have only one question to ask- is there any formula that gives u that central idea?
sincerel,
nita</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>hi,<br />
the advice was great.<br />
I have only one question to ask- is there any formula that gives u that central idea?<br />
sincerel,<br />
nita</p>
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		<title>By: Peter Black</title>
		<link>http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/john-forde/when-copywriting-formulas-come-up-short-heres-what-to-do.html#comment-2664</link>
		<dc:creator>Peter Black</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Apr 2008 15:17:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, John.  I'm copying out this sucker right now and taping it to my computer.  I, too, am working hard to break the habit of writing overly conscientiously.  Often I have to push myself to dispair before my inner critic just gives up and says, &#34;Do whatever you want. I don't care!&#34;  That's when the good stuff comes out.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, John.  I&#8217;m copying out this sucker right now and taping it to my computer.  I, too, am working hard to break the habit of writing overly conscientiously.  Often I have to push myself to dispair before my inner critic just gives up and says, &quot;Do whatever you want. I don&#8217;t care!&quot;  That&#8217;s when the good stuff comes out.</p>
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